tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-506692418085235777.post8914567811850873713..comments2024-01-05T00:22:32.379-08:00Comments on Akasha Savage: I would just like to say.....Akasha Savage.http://www.blogger.com/profile/13482147165827577180noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-506692418085235777.post-14140639146399315952010-04-03T15:51:52.930-07:002010-04-03T15:51:52.930-07:00Yeah, it did make my head pound a bit. :-pYeah, it did make my head pound a bit. :-pAnthony Rapinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581208296144295224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-506692418085235777.post-44261581937699110792010-04-03T10:40:28.532-07:002010-04-03T10:40:28.532-07:00Rick ~ Thanks! :)Rick ~ Thanks! :)Akasha Savage.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13482147165827577180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-506692418085235777.post-63567223414474388782010-04-02T15:22:17.935-07:002010-04-02T15:22:17.935-07:00Here, here, Akasha! Good post!Here, here, Akasha! Good post!Rickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14546882686381428986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-506692418085235777.post-62963286511057444302010-04-02T11:57:37.996-07:002010-04-02T11:57:37.996-07:00Onipar ~ laughing and thinking at the same time! T...Onipar ~ laughing and thinking at the same time! That sounds painful.Akasha Savage.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13482147165827577180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-506692418085235777.post-12889738660983961312010-04-01T14:03:07.788-07:002010-04-01T14:03:07.788-07:00Awesome! That had me laughing *and* thinking. A ...Awesome! That had me laughing *and* thinking. A deadly combo. :-)Anthony Rapinohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11581208296144295224noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-506692418085235777.post-26935424390098791962010-03-31T06:51:37.591-07:002010-03-31T06:51:37.591-07:00I think I must be quite lucky, I find dialogue eas...I think I must be quite lucky, I find dialogue easy to write. It helps if you read it aloud to yourself - I do this all the time, much to the annoyance of my family!!Akasha Savage.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13482147165827577180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-506692418085235777.post-13387227487903370202010-03-30T18:53:50.713-07:002010-03-30T18:53:50.713-07:00I really struggle with dialogue. It's hard to ...I really struggle with dialogue. It's hard to make it flow with the story sometimes. Good posting, Akasha.Kathttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11410730283603224430noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-506692418085235777.post-30417165976721680532010-03-30T12:51:32.317-07:002010-03-30T12:51:32.317-07:00Hi Alan....you're back!
I know exactly what y...Hi Alan....you're back! <br />I know exactly what you mean, I don't usually add in 'umms, ahhs and duhs', just did it this time for the hell of it! Good to hear from you.Akasha Savage.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13482147165827577180noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-506692418085235777.post-17897455843187133252010-03-30T02:39:18.786-07:002010-03-30T02:39:18.786-07:00That's a nice interaction, Miss. I love educat...That's a nice interaction, Miss. I love educational. If I can add one thing I recall from school...edit out unnecessary rambling and thing like:'umms, errs, OKs' etc from your dialogue that slow things down and remove the reader from the story.Alan W. Davidsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17067022519729701245noreply@blogger.com